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Call your immortal steeds to delay their descent
I lust for time to capture this golden event
One evening, not so distant, I was driving home from work as the sun set gloriously on a cloud lined horizon. My initial awe was replaced by a penetrating desire to find the words that would genuinely convey the image before me. What would Joseph Conrad say? I tried my mind. I searched my vocabulary. I cursed at my slow wit as the colours changed before me. I reassured myself. Try again, I prodded. What do you see now? I turned the corner into my street, and the horizon fell behind the tree line. I held that image in my mind’s eye. I floundered and grabbed for adjectives. I searched through my inadequate collection of purples, reds and blues. I rounded the final dog leg. There it was, peeking at me from behind the eucalypts. I collected the mail, drove into the garage and hurriedly raced up the stairs to my balcony. The sun had set. There was nothing more to see. I flicked through the mail and glanced upon the car insurance papers. The family dog barked incessantly.
One visceral moment stamps a most haunting imprint
The challenge is raised to define this daunting imprint
~O~
Beneath an altostratus flow
Of orange, violet and mauve
She wept the most divine of blue
A blue that blushed with emerald
And I loved her
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July 6, 2008 at 12:35 am |
oh that is…wow. that is so entrancing i have to pause and take it in and read it again and again. you did very well with this.
July 8, 2008 at 12:34 am |
Thank you Meander. It was very satisfying to express that moment, and I am pleased that you enjoyed reading it. I owe you a thank you for giving me the word “visceral”.
July 8, 2008 at 11:25 pm |
This post is to savour. For what it is. Glad I visited you.
piece of charcoal split into splinters
July 9, 2008 at 12:42 am |
oh yes! i’ve had that same experience and struggle for words . . . but i never did find the right words, i’m so glad you did so i could finally read it! :-)
July 9, 2008 at 4:40 am |
You do a great job of introducing “blue” as it must have looked to you. Well crafted.
July 9, 2008 at 9:36 pm |
I love the last line, “She wept the most divine of blue
A blue that blushed with emerald”. Simply wonderful.
July 13, 2008 at 2:41 am |
entrancing is the word, I know I’m not the first to say it…