A Sunset Oyster reveals Her pearl

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Call your immortal steeds to delay their descent
I lust for time to capture this golden event

One evening, not so distant, I was driving home from work as the sun set gloriously on a cloud lined horizon. My initial awe was replaced by a penetrating desire to find the words that would genuinely convey the image before me. What would Joseph Conrad say? I tried my mind. I searched my vocabulary. I cursed at my slow wit as the colours changed before me. I reassured myself. Try again, I prodded. What do you see now? I turned the corner into my street, and the horizon fell behind the tree line. I held that image in my mind’s eye. I floundered and grabbed for adjectives. I searched through my inadequate collection of purples, reds and blues. I rounded the final dog leg. There it was, peeking at me from behind the eucalypts. I collected the mail, drove into the garage and hurriedly raced up the stairs to my balcony. The sun had set. There was nothing more to see. I flicked through the mail and glanced upon the car insurance papers. The family dog barked incessantly.

One visceral moment stamps a most haunting imprint
The challenge is raised to define this daunting imprint
~O~

Beneath an altostratus flow
Of orange, violet and mauve

She wept the most divine of blue
A blue that blushed with emerald

And I loved her

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Read Write Poem – Get your poem on #34

7 Responses to “A Sunset Oyster reveals Her pearl”

  1. Meander Says:

    oh that is…wow. that is so entrancing i have to pause and take it in and read it again and again. you did very well with this.

  2. Brad Says:

    Thank you Meander. It was very satisfying to express that moment, and I am pleased that you enjoyed reading it. I owe you a thank you for giving me the word “visceral”.

  3. gautami tripathy Says:

    This post is to savour. For what it is. Glad I visited you.

    piece of charcoal split into splinters

  4. throwshiswords Says:

    oh yes! i’ve had that same experience and struggle for words . . . but i never did find the right words, i’m so glad you did so i could finally read it! :-)

  5. nathan1313 Says:

    You do a great job of introducing “blue” as it must have looked to you. Well crafted.

  6. Pam Says:

    I love the last line, “She wept the most divine of blue
    A blue that blushed with emerald”. Simply wonderful.

  7. Crafty Green Poet Says:

    entrancing is the word, I know I’m not the first to say it…

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