~~~
digital sand squeaks
escape from beachside foot prints;
memories are born
~~~
by Brad Frederiksen
for Pen Me A Poem
The Prompt this week is “Birth”
Maekitso’s Café
Random inspiration and thought provocation. Hot and cold refreshments.
~~~
digital sand squeaks
escape from beachside foot prints;
memories are born
~~~
by Brad Frederiksen
for Pen Me A Poem
The Prompt this week is “Birth”
July 23, 2008 at 10:56 pm |
This is certainly a Haiku to spend time contemplating. As you know, that’s the wonder of this poetic form. I like it a lot. Great entry to the poetry prompt and thank you for joining in. I admire your work.
July 24, 2008 at 1:50 am |
I read your mini-bio and the first line suddenly made perfect sense to me.
July 24, 2008 at 12:35 pm |
Edward – Thank you for your kind comments. I did enjoy contemplating this one after it came together.
Annie – I hadn’t thought of this as autobiographical, but the great thing about poetry is the freedom of interpretation. Glad you found one that I had missed.
July 25, 2008 at 4:42 am |
[...] sole Haiku entered into this week’s prompt was from Brad Frederiksen, a current Philosophy undergraduate [...]
July 25, 2008 at 6:15 am |
I enjoyed this Haiku very much, it could almost pass for a senryu as well if one was to apply it literally to life. Well done