Comments on: Third Rock Ballad http://maekitso.wordpress.com/2008/07/28/third-rock-ballad/ Random inspiration and thought provocation. Hot and cold refreshments. Fri, 13 Nov 2009 13:39:49 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: Pen Me A Poem http://maekitso.wordpress.com/2008/07/28/third-rock-ballad/#comment-226 Pen Me A Poem Mon, 28 Jul 2008 13:41:32 +0000 http://maekitso.wordpress.com/?p=104#comment-226 I really like this and the rich variety of words you have used. I was particularly attracted to this line: "A breeze tugged the collar and licked away tears From leaves ..." The imagery was wonderful. Great write! I really like this and the rich variety of words you have used. I was particularly attracted to this line: “A breeze tugged the collar and licked away tears From leaves …”
The imagery was wonderful.
Great write!

]]> By: nathan1313 http://maekitso.wordpress.com/2008/07/28/third-rock-ballad/#comment-220 nathan1313 Mon, 28 Jul 2008 11:08:35 +0000 http://maekitso.wordpress.com/?p=104#comment-220 Yes, I was really surprised by the image of chocolate -- nice work. Yes, I was really surprised by the image of chocolate — nice work.

]]> By: durable pigments http://maekitso.wordpress.com/2008/07/28/third-rock-ballad/#comment-219 durable pigments Mon, 28 Jul 2008 10:44:56 +0000 http://maekitso.wordpress.com/?p=104#comment-219 Great rhythm and rhyme in these lines! I keep turning on the line "Replaced by a streak of milk chocolate..." here, which seems so incongruous with the rest... adding this layer of sweetness, making me think of a warplay among kids. Intriguing piece! Great rhythm and rhyme in these lines! I keep turning on the line “Replaced by a streak of milk chocolate…” here, which seems so incongruous with the rest… adding this layer of sweetness, making me think of a warplay among kids. Intriguing piece!

]]> By: Sweet Talking Guy.. http://maekitso.wordpress.com/2008/07/28/third-rock-ballad/#comment-218 Sweet Talking Guy.. Mon, 28 Jul 2008 10:19:08 +0000 http://maekitso.wordpress.com/?p=104#comment-218 hi Brad, you've got the format bang on! I've been singing this in my deepest voice.. hi Brad, you’ve got the format bang on!
I’ve been singing this in my deepest voice..

]]> By: gautami tripathy http://maekitso.wordpress.com/2008/07/28/third-rock-ballad/#comment-216 gautami tripathy Mon, 28 Jul 2008 08:27:23 +0000 http://maekitso.wordpress.com/?p=104#comment-216 Rok Ballad! This is simply marvellous! <a href="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2008/07/deeply-in-love-with-draculas-daughter.html" rel="nofollow">deeply in love with dracula's daughter</a> Rok Ballad! This is simply marvellous!

deeply in love with dracula’s daughter

]]> By: Missy http://maekitso.wordpress.com/2008/07/28/third-rock-ballad/#comment-215 Missy Sun, 27 Jul 2008 18:04:16 +0000 http://maekitso.wordpress.com/?p=104#comment-215 What a piece! The imagery of this really had me there in the moment. I like how you brought this all together. What a piece! The imagery of this really had me there in the moment. I like how you brought this all together.

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