This poem was inspired after reading an excerpt from Simonne Michelle-Wells’ ‘Beat’. Many thanks, Simonne. I am looking forward to grabbing my copy when it hits the shelves.
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More than once my wrist has pulsed
with aches of sweet temptation.
To prostrate on the public grass
and revel in sensation.
You’d think that touching earth was
tantamount to masturbation.
For the voices in my head provoke
a fear of conversation.
And so I walk in solitude,
free from allegation.
Among the trees and birds and stones;
a momentary flirtation.
I stroke the sandstone facia.
I admire her foundation.
My soft and civil fingers
poorly formed for clear translation.
I press my ear to peeling bark
and pause an inhalation.
Beneath her rough and rugged flesh
I hear her aspirations.
Bellbirds tinkle in her mop
expressing admiration
for beams of sun that dance on mother’s
misty sweet lactations.
My soul leaks out in tears of joy,
my heart forms oscillations.
I turn, restored, to face the gaze
and weep at our castration.
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by Brad Frederiksen
6 responses so far ↓
paisley // August 17, 2008 at 4:09 am |
wow.. this sounds so majestic.. in every way,, such a sophisticated rhyme… i am in love…….
Meander // August 17, 2008 at 4:25 am |
wow…you really worked hard on this. i love how you experiment with word and rhyme.
Paul // August 17, 2008 at 9:13 am |
Beautifully made poem with a complex and carefully unwound thought. And Simonne’s book will be great. I will be lining up too.
mrs. sarah ott // August 17, 2008 at 2:01 pm |
wow, i felt like i was on a journey, or walking next to someone on theirs. really complex as paul said. exquisite waves of sound, intricate words with powerful recourse. very cool
Simonne // August 17, 2008 at 4:47 pm |
God you’re talented. I inspired THIS? … cool! :)
Your poetry is amazing, it truly is. “My soul leaks out in tears of joy…” Beautiful.
Brad // August 18, 2008 at 6:51 pm |
Thanks Paisley and Meander and Sarah and Paul and Simonne. You are all wonderful wordsmiths, and a great inspiration to my writing.