You are lying flat in a snow covered field looking straight ahead with your arms out at your sides. Majesties Peter and Paul are circling above you – their heads, like yours, in the clouds. There’s a barbed wire fence over there with Kamloops on this side and T’Kemlups on the other. Sheets of ice are drifting down the Thompson River and gathering where the North arm meets the South. Somewhere in between the spinning and the falling flat your voice snapped away and hurled in one direction or another. Moments later it fell, cold and silent, while you took to making snow angels. All these years later I find myself on my knees, in Australia, looking for ‘your’ voice! Go figure.
January 21, 2009 at 10:27 am |
hmmn do i know this paul? next time i make a snow angel i will think of you!
January 21, 2009 at 11:09 am |
Tiny figures in a vast landscape. Angels transcend time and space just as this delicate and precise prose poem does.
January 21, 2009 at 12:09 pm |
Very good Paul!
January 21, 2009 at 10:49 pm |
Remind me: how many angets will fit on the point of a snowflake?
January 22, 2009 at 3:19 am |
731 angels…
depending, of course, upon temperature and humidity.
hi, hi Brad. I want to know more. Googling words that are fun to read, and more fun, maybe, to say
January 22, 2009 at 5:14 pm |
Simply beautiful.
January 23, 2009 at 5:35 am |
Made me feel cold and warm all at once.
January 23, 2009 at 9:01 am |
I admit I read this several times, looking for clues as to who ‘they’ were, their age, their relationship and, in the end, it didn’t matter because the journey was worth not finding out. (damn, does that make sense?) Beautiful descriptive passages.
January 23, 2009 at 5:02 pm |
wide (in the clouds) and yet tightly wound (barbed wire) a moment of crystal in snowflakes where the voice emerges, your voice, and rings out beautifully. bravo! encore!
January 25, 2009 at 8:44 pm |
Oh, beautiful.
January 30, 2009 at 2:43 am |
What a beautiful description. I see everything so vividly. I want more.