Snow angels

You are lying flat in a snow covered field looking straight ahead with your arms out at your sides. Majesties Peter and Paul are circling above you – their heads, like yours, in the clouds. There’s a barbed wire fence over there with Kamloops on this side and T’Kemlups on the other. Sheets of ice are drifting down the Thompson River and gathering where the North arm meets the South. Somewhere in between the spinning and the falling flat your voice snapped away and hurled in one direction or another. Moments later it fell, cold and silent, while you took to making snow angels. All these years later I find myself on my knees, in Australia, looking for ‘your’ voice! Go figure.

11 Responses to “Snow angels”

  1. art predator Says:

    hmmn do i know this paul? next time i make a snow angel i will think of you!

  2. Paul Squires Says:

    Tiny figures in a vast landscape. Angels transcend time and space just as this delicate and precise prose poem does.

  3. Adrian Laroque Says:

    Very good Paul!

  4. Dave King Says:

    Remind me: how many angets will fit on the point of a snowflake?

  5. amuirin Says:

    731 angels…

    depending, of course, upon temperature and humidity.

    hi, hi Brad. I want to know more. Googling words that are fun to read, and more fun, maybe, to say

  6. harmonie22 Says:

    Simply beautiful.

  7. poeticgrin Says:

    Made me feel cold and warm all at once.

  8. Narnie Says:

    I admit I read this several times, looking for clues as to who ‘they’ were, their age, their relationship and, in the end, it didn’t matter because the journey was worth not finding out. (damn, does that make sense?) Beautiful descriptive passages.

  9. tipota Says:

    wide (in the clouds) and yet tightly wound (barbed wire) a moment of crystal in snowflakes where the voice emerges, your voice, and rings out beautifully. bravo! encore!

  10. Simonne Says:

    Oh, beautiful.

  11. cocoyea Says:

    What a beautiful description. I see everything so vividly. I want more.

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