the back bone’s connected to the
heart’s eye
the heart’s eye’s connected to the
mind’s eye
the mind’s eye’s connected to the
outside
the outside’s connected to the
inside
the inside’s connected to the
outside
the outside’s connected to the
mind’s eye
the mind’s eye’s connected to the
heart’s eye
the heart’s eye’s connected to the
back bone
the back bone’s connected to the
“cock”[sic].
January 14, 2011
Cock[sic]
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January 14th, 2011 at 8:43 pm
This is very clever. You remember the song at openmic? Haha – none of us could remember the words. I reckon these ones would have done much better. I like this very, very much and it is a good way to start a morning with a chuckle.
January 14th, 2011 at 9:18 pm
Good poem to wake up to. Thanks Brad.
January 14th, 2011 at 10:13 pm
Fabulous! I love it so much…I hesitate…it’s sooooo much better than the beating you give it with the last line!
January 15th, 2011 at 2:50 am
Well, as long as everything is connected, it’s all good Brad. :)
January 15th, 2011 at 6:46 am
fun word flow…
January 15th, 2011 at 9:27 am
love the form and humor ;)
January 15th, 2011 at 12:39 pm
a minimalist rhapsody excellently played
January 16th, 2011 at 11:36 pm
Thanks. It was a fun one. :)